hey. I think its amazing ! stunning colors, maybe a little bit tooooo crazy but still nice work !

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Wow, 3 weeks? this is Amazing man!!!
Why dont you try Illustrator?
Amazing colors!!

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Graphic Design is.. VIDA!
Edwardo.

this. is sooo sick. I'm a huge fan of your lettering, man, and this whole thing just looks awesome.

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!

_{Absolutely love the colors. It's really working with the black background.}

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_{“If your dream is alive, then one day it will come true.” - SeoHyun, SNSD}

Thank you very much, bright colors are on the great joys of my life. The black background was a difficult decision but it turned out to be the best contrasting of all the light and color which seems like a natural decision but it took a while to decide.

Thanks for the comment!

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_{Technogasmic Art [Behance|RYZ Wear|devART]}

This is dope. I any chance you can come up with a 900px tall version so I can use it as my wall without stretching?

Yeah this definitely looks like techno. And looking at the detail i can see how this took 3 weeks. it's truly impressive.

But I don't know about the overall composition. The parts in the corners look out of place and I honestly think it would not be harmed at all if they were removed or incorporated into the centre.

Also those colour blurs in the background clash a bit. You have flat colours and shapes in the foreground and gradients in the background, it doesn't mesh well and it's pretty distracting. I think there would be so much more focus on the psychedelic colours if you removed the soft colours in the background and the images on the sides and corners. It needs a clear focal point I think, and why not make it the central shapes and colours?

Also, while I truly love the icons down the bottom of the piece, I think they need to be made smaller. They take up too much of the image and once again they distract the eye. You want people to look at them after they have taken in the piece, not have them fighting for the viewer's attention. I really love the typography of "Technogasm", was that done by hand or is it a font? Either or, it's mad as, and if it is a font i wonder if it's too much trouble to ask for it?

There's so much potential in this artwork, so many cool ideas that work really nicely. But I think it just needs to be tweaked some more to make it truly great.

I apologise if i came across as overly critical and harsh, but I wanted to leave you a comment worthy of all the hard work you put into this. One of the most frustrating things is pouring your heart and soul into something and not getting enough meaningful feedback in return. Haha that said, the second most frustrating thing is pouring your heart and soul into something and then having some dickhead trying to point out all it's perceived flaws. So I am sorry for that!

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You spend the first five years trying to get with the plan and the next five years trying to be with your friends again.

Wow! Thank you very much!

I have to let you know that I am not at all offended or anything like that but am rather flattered and would like to thank you.

Yes, I agree the things in the corners are quite distracting, I'd thought about that quite a lot myself when I was making it and I think I'll follow your advice and change it soon.

The typography part was done by hand (you can see it if you'd like, I'll put it in my scraps). I used the font "CLUB" after altering it quite a bit and then well, you'll see once I get it up.

I have to say that I enjoyed your constructive criticism very much and the times you get it in its essence are few and far between so your comment was quite refreshing and thanks again!

_{And no, you're not a dickhead. In fact I'm going to watch you too I took a quick look and I like what I see...}

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_{Technogasmic Art [Behance|RYZ Wear|devART]}

Without all that jazz... (the original "techno" drawing)

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_{Technogasmic Art [Behance|RYZ Wear|devART]}